When did you lose your mother?
19 06 2008Long ago there lived a dolphin that was about a size of a small whale. One day in came a big storm and wrecked every thing in its way,all the animals lost their families, and the did the whales too.
Everyone all cried for help but no one was there,if the whale had listened he wouldn’t be there now. So the dolphins gathered round to see what they had found. Soon after a minute or so they all could go. They swam all day and night but they were going the wrong way and met a friend that was also a lost one. “Hey the rest of our parents have all died.”
“What are we going to do with food and the others to?” said the younger dolphins.”We’ll think of some thing.”Months and month they searched and search for their place to stay but could find it.So they started to head north and losing each other step by step……
Hi Katherine!
Lovely story, I enjoyed reading it, and it really taught me things you know!!
What a story, I would kill my see if if my parents died!!!!
Bye Kathy again!
Great start to your story Katherine, you show great commitment by writing at home, but remember to get your work checked by two friends and then me (MrsP) BEFORE you publish. This will help make sure that your very best quality * * * work is published for everyone to see
I can’t wait to find out what happens to your dolphins next …….
MrsP
Hi Kathy
I agree with MrsP you did start your story really well and I can’t wait to see what happens next….
And I agree with normastar that you taught me things that you know!!
Tooooooooodles
Lilly!!