Adventures begin!!!

11 07 2008

Our story begins from the last story”When did you lose your mother”I’m here to finish that story.So the dolphins swam to a place they have never been before.”Hey,where do you think your going?” a voice said from the back.”We were just going to look for a place to stay for a couple of days and then set of to find a home that’s all.”my brother said.”oh,okay keep on going then.”a man said.

Soon enough the group of dolphins travelled through the cold sea they were heading for.Finally they found a place to stay in for the moment.After a week or so the dolphins set of again to find their new house.”Hey look a house that been built!”my sister said in excitement.”cool…”my brother said.”okay its that house it is..” i said happily.So they comforted them selves.Just then they heard the non-stopping radio,it said “A storm is coming again and its hitting north of our sea, so animals of the sea move if you are in the north side!!”They heard the warning and they hurried out from the door.The unhappy dolphins swam as fast as they could. They made it until it was getting dark.”Can i go to sleep I’m tied?”said the little brother of the small group.”Sorry,but we got to save this food for later.”my brother said.Just then an unwarned wind came in and blow our things away and the most bad thing was the mini storm,lots of rubbish blew in and was floating every where in our ocean.We also saw one of our oldest living friends swim by and chock on a plastic bag that was also mistaken by a jelly fish.”Brother,why can’t we eat that?”Baby dolphin said.”Because its rubbish and rubbish is dirty.”My big brother said.”Come on,we better go on before some thing else happens.” I ordered.After days and weeks of journeys across the ocean,divers came to the sea to find things.One diver swam towards us and took us kindly to follow them.At first we didn’t know what going on around there.

Mean while we stoped we came to this park with lots of people around.My cousins,friends, brothers & sisters were put in a pool together,the first time i felt scared but then the humans were being very kind and friendly with us.As days past i didn’t feel scared any more.So it looks like were staying here as our new home!!So on the days of Storm and darkness,i never felt scared as long as I’m with my family and my friends.Along came a dark sky became to rush in to the bright sky and covered the sun in darkness!!The dolphins all swam together.The others were all scared but my big brother was last in the line.I was scared of losing him like a lost my parents and my grand mothers and fathers.I called for him to come in.He finally listened and came back quickily to the other pool that the humans brought us,we leaped and jumped across like little mad things.We were brought inside the park,there we had food and our own room.

After the day had gone,we came back out side in the other pool.We had to get ready for the show today.As we were ready, people came rushing in the gates that was opening really fast and some children pinched some of the smaller childern that was getting in their way.Finally,all the children were in the gates and they finally closed the gates after the wild rush.So they spent many hours just taking pictures and playing with us in the sea and the other lands.We had massive fun meeting all the different children.Soon enough it was night time.All the dolphins,animals and fish were going to sleep.Until an early warning came from the clouds again.As the clouds began to cover the sky in a grey mushroom cloud,we got together again and just looked up in the sky,bits of water were dripping on our mouths and noses.It was a great view.My little brother didn’t even know what in it was but he just played around with it.After our view from the tiny little rain drops from the sky we went back to what we were doing,sleeping of course!! Soon the next day began as always you have people pinching and pushing through their way to see the great and entertaining tricks the animals have planed for us to do,many photos were taken and even my little brothers was in it!!We always have lots of fun and smiles every where.”Hey, big brother i like this new home of ours do you?”i said.”Yeah,i don’t just like it i loved it and its freedom!!”he said.So our lives got better when the day when the humans found us and they made us make new friends and it great that we all like our new home and we are going to live in it for ever!! By the time we grew older and older our little brothers are not little any more but they are big like us like we were before.Soon we passed away and leaving our brothers behind to take care of them selves and enjoy their new home in the new town and has to learn how to be nice dolphins and kind to humans and not treat them like bad people to them.

 

 

 

 

   

                                    

 


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3 responses to “Adventures begin!!!”

21 08 2008
  Zoe (20:59:20) :

Hi Katherine
I got your comment. Your blog looks great.
I have a nother blog that is my one that i do at school.
It is http://zoe56c08.learnerblogs.org :)
Bye xoxox :)

22 08 2008
  Zoe (13:32:33) :

Hi katherine :)
Thanks for looking at my blog.
well these are my anwser’s to the questions on my blog.
My favorite colour is Purple.
I do live on a farm.
My favorite animal is horses and ponies.
My favorite sport is netball and my favorite subject at school is maths.

Bye xoxox :)

27 08 2008
  Nadine (19:23:06) :

Hey Kathy
Nicely Written! Firstly, thanks for your comment, I’m glad you liked my glad counter!! And yes I am happy to have a blog… :roll:
This story touched me to the core of the heart, and sometimes I felt like hugging the dolphins!! I’m really glad they found happiness and freedom with the humans and developed great bonds with children before they passed away. So when they DID pass away, they did knowing they’d lived freely, proudly and joyfully.
Maybe you should watch out for the punctuation and spelling when you write Katherine… but otherwise, WELL DONE!!! AND I ENJOYED THAT STORY VERY MUCH!!!!!! :D
Hugs, Nadine

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