Get me out of here!!!
It was 25 years ago since I remember this story about a haunted school. One day when it was a day I started school, I felt so scared because the looks of the school freaks me out. I so when I started I was only in kindergarten and my mother had to say with me for the day to see how I went on with others. When I got to class the teacher invited me to sit at one of the desks but the children in the class didn’t seem so nice. So I thought of sitting by my self in a nice and quiet place to claim my self down before my nervous fever gets very bad.[I start to scream if i don't get my self straight.]
So that after noon my mum and I came outside to play but then” ring” her phone called.”Hello, who’s this?” She answered.”Brenda, get back to your office this instant. We have an important meeting to discuss!!”Her boss shouted that even I could hear from a far distance.” mum do have to go?” I asked sadly knowing that the school bully would come to bash me up in no time. I began to worry about it so much that I needed to go toilet.
So as my mum went, I hurried my self down to the toilets. And here is how every thing began. I sat there quietly on the toilet seat, while i was in the toilets I heard a voice whisper to me” Come here….”"www who are you?” I said in a scared look.” Kill!!!” he added no longer whispering. As soon as I was done I rushed out to tell the teacher.”Miss, there was a voice in there talking to me.” “Non- sense my child, theres no such thing.” my teacher said thinking as if it was a joke.” No miss there is such thing.” I said.” Okay I’ll check.” so she walked into the toilet to see if there was. As she walked into the toilets looked around to see if there was any thing wrong with it.
So I waited outside for her. She took a long time.” I wonder what could take her so long?” i asked my self. As soon as I walked in I saw blood every where and mostly the ground, I realized that the trail leads to my teacher. I screamed”Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!”Running for my life. I wonder what is going to happen to the rest of the school and i know I’m on top of the list. .:!: 
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Hi Kathy
I loved that post on get me out of here!!! Your story was realy cool even I could’nt make a story even scarier than that.
:p 
Posted August 19, 2008, 4:46 pmHello Kathy Freeman (Your Nickname)
Posted August 21, 2008, 7:26 pmI thought you tackled that story really well, so congratulations for making it really interesting and creative. Well done.
I thought that in the girl’s place, I would be freaked out for sure… especially with the voice and the murder of a teacher. Scary.
I cannot wait to hear what happens next, KEEP THAT AWESOME STORY COMING!!
P.S Thanks for your comment. I really like School, having a great class and teacher. I know… most of the things we learned, I barely knew before CSIRO came.
Kisses, Nadine
Katherine, what a great place to stop – we hope you’re going to finish this story, or at least add another chapter or two! Why is it though, that students seem to relish killing off teachers in their stories? Is it something we did?
Posted August 22, 2008, 3:16 pmMrs C and 5/6C
Hey Kathy
Posted September 1, 2008, 3:37 pmGood luck with the login. Miss will handle it, you should calm down…
I’ll be waiting for the other part of the story!! And I can’t wait.
Keep the excellent work up
Kisses,
Nadine
Hey kathy
Posted September 3, 2008, 2:40 pmThanks for your comment and your vote. Yes I am very proud of my 6 word stories but they are all too good and I cannot decide between them. That is why I asked some friends of mine to be the judges of that.
Such a cool story Katherine, I really can’t wait for the next chapter!! Whenever you get that chance, write write and write it down and let us know what happens next.
Nadine
Kathy,
Posted September 10, 2008, 3:38 pmIt is such a scary story! If I was the girl i’d never ever go to the toilet ever again!
I can’t wait for the next chapter!
See You!
Hi Kathy
Posted September 10, 2008, 4:44 pmI loved your story but there is just one thing that I didn’t under stand how did the teacher die?. By the way I dont mean to be rude or anything but you have alot of mistakes in that post.
Bye Lati
Hi Lati,
well the teacher died because she went to check if there was any thing wrong going on in the toilets, because the girl told her to.
Remember how the story told you that there were noisies in there, so she went to check then she died because of the voice.
Bye!!
Hope to stay in touch together
Katherine
Posted September 11, 2008, 1:08 pmHey kathy,
I love your post it was so interesting and at the same time I got scared I was about to scream
I agree with Mrs C to at least write one-two more chapters.(please that would be really good)
I wish I could try to do a story like that
How did you remember this story
I wonder what will happen next………..?
Bye, bye Kathy
Posted September 16, 2008, 8:57 pm