My Colour Poem
My colour means evil, darkness and unwelcoming.
My colour sounds like a passing shadow.
My colour feels like darkness rising.
My colour is the same colour as an opening of a cave and is the same as a thunder cloud.
My colour smells like dark mist.
My colour tastes like a burnt object.
My colour’s feelings are not risk taking and not calm.
My colour is BLACK!!!
From the character Shadow!!!
Image: ‘Shadow the Hedgehog‘
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Hi Kathy
Posted September 18, 2008, 4:43 pmThat was a very dark colour poem. I loved it. My favourite part was when you said “My colour feels like darkness rising” that was really good. I’ve done the character Shadow too i’m going to put it up next week maybe.
Bye Lati :lol
Thats good to hear Lati,
i think i like that bit too!!
I read yours on your blog and my favourite part was ” My colour feels like a touch of death.”
That sentence really touched my soul, deeply inside!!
Bye Latika
Katherine :mmrgreen:
Posted September 19, 2008, 1:44 pmHi Katherine
Posted September 19, 2008, 4:51 pmWhat a great poem it is really good.
The Allstars blog looks fantastic and you have a lot of people coming to visit your blog. My class has started up a wiki if you want to visit it, it is http://56c2008.pbwiki.com
Familys blog http://zoesfamily.edublogs.org
My blog http://zoe56c08.learnerblogs.org
Bye xoxox
Hello Katherine!!!!
. Yes i can now feel the darkness rising!
Nice and fantastic blog well done keep up the good work!!
If I had the colour black i would describe it just like you did because you described everything about the colour black. Katherine….. i can smell the dark mist of the colour black
Keep up the good work!!!
(keep in touch)
sarah
Posted September 22, 2008, 3:52 pmHello Katherine
I loved the poem,and could smell and taste everything and even reach out to them..
Well done, you did the whole poem perfectly well!
I like your poem once again, you might want to check mine as well though..
I couldn’t take my eyes off the page, your words froze me in my tracks!!
Nadine
Posted September 22, 2008, 3:52 pmHey Kathy,
WOW
My favourite part was
“My colour is the same colour as an opening of a cave and is the same as a thunder cloud.”
I agree with Nadine you could
smell and taste everything and even reach out to them..
That was an amazing poem on colours you did.
How did you think of those BRILLIANT sentences
They really gave me a fright and it froze my computer of frightness
Shadow is very scary and I think that black is the colour is just right for him because of his evilness.
Posted September 23, 2008, 10:47 pmTooooooooooooooodles !
Keep in touch!
Lilly
Hello Katherine
Posted October 7, 2008, 3:56 pmThanks for your comment!
You’re the sweetest thing! Same here.. it is SO hard and boring without you and I sit there, bored to death! Your comment made me smile and laugh. I hope you have something fun and exciting to do sometime. Don’t worry, school is coming soon, and then I’ll see you again! YAY!
Funny how 1 day to you is a year… FUNNY! I guess that is pretty boring!
But keep your hopes up Kath…
Keep writing!
Miss you Heaps!!!
@ Sarah,
thanks again for your comment!
Its great that you liked my poem, poems are really great to read!!
I just enjoy making up poems myself as well.
Do you??
By the way, i read your poem and i thought it was…. FANTASTIC!!
Bye !!
~ Katherine ~
Posted October 21, 2008, 9:59 amHello Katherine!!!
I must say that you did that poem so well. You are really good at them especially when you have to base it on a charater! Poems are really great to read because they sound so great! When you read them out loud then you notice that it sounds amazing!!!
I enjoy making poems up! (That’s why I put poems up!!)
Did you read the new poem i put up?
Thank you for replying!!
Sarah
Posted October 29, 2008, 5:31 pm(By the way, you should enjoy making up poems because you are so good at it!!!)
Hi Katherine
Thanks for your comment.
I like your colour poem!I like shadow too!even I like black.Especially the gun in his hand.
bye,bye
Posted October 30, 2008, 2:20 pm