Comments on: My Colour Poem http://katherine1.edublogs.org/2008/09/17/my-colour-poem/ Just another Edublogs.org weblog Sun, 08 Mar 2009 08:43:20 -0400 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.8.2 hourly 1 By: turzo http://katherine1.edublogs.org/2008/09/17/my-colour-poem/comment-page-1/#comment-76 turzo Thu, 30 Oct 2008 03:20:24 +0000 http://katherine1.edublogs.org/?p=29#comment-76 Hi Katherine Thanks for your comment. I like your colour poem!I like shadow too!even I like black.Especially the gun in his hand. bye,bye Hi Katherine
Thanks for your comment.
I like your colour poem!I like shadow too!even I like black.Especially the gun in his hand.

bye,bye

]]> By: Sarah http://katherine1.edublogs.org/2008/09/17/my-colour-poem/comment-page-1/#comment-75 Sarah Wed, 29 Oct 2008 06:31:32 +0000 http://katherine1.edublogs.org/?p=29#comment-75 Hello Katherine!!! :mrgreen: I must say that you did that poem so well. You are really good at them especially when you have to base it on a charater! Poems are really great to read because they sound so great! When you read them out loud then you notice that it sounds amazing!!! I enjoy making poems up! (That's why I put poems up!!) :) Did you read the new poem i put up? Thank you for replying!! :lol: Sarah (By the way, you should enjoy making up poems because you are so good at it!!!) :D :P Hello Katherine!!! :mrgreen:
I must say that you did that poem so well. You are really good at them especially when you have to base it on a charater! Poems are really great to read because they sound so great! When you read them out loud then you notice that it sounds amazing!!!

I enjoy making poems up! (That’s why I put poems up!!) :) Did you read the new poem i put up?
Thank you for replying!! :lol:

Sarah
(By the way, you should enjoy making up poems because you are so good at it!!!) :D :P

]]> By: Katherine http://katherine1.edublogs.org/2008/09/17/my-colour-poem/comment-page-1/#comment-71 Katherine Mon, 20 Oct 2008 22:59:03 +0000 http://katherine1.edublogs.org/?p=29#comment-71 @ Sarah, thanks again for your comment! Its great that you liked my poem, poems are really great to read!! :) I just enjoy making up poems myself as well. Do you?? :P By the way, i read your poem and i thought it was.... FANTASTIC!! :mrgreen: Bye !! ~ Katherine ~ @ Sarah,
thanks again for your comment!
Its great that you liked my poem, poems are really great to read!! :)
I just enjoy making up poems myself as well.
Do you?? :P
By the way, i read your poem and i thought it was…. FANTASTIC!! :mrgreen:

Bye !!

~ Katherine ~

]]> By: Nadine http://katherine1.edublogs.org/2008/09/17/my-colour-poem/comment-page-1/#comment-58 Nadine Tue, 07 Oct 2008 04:56:16 +0000 http://katherine1.edublogs.org/?p=29#comment-58 Hello Katherine Thanks for your comment! You’re the sweetest thing! Same here.. it is SO hard and boring without you and I sit there, bored to death! Your comment made me smile and laugh. I hope you have something fun and exciting to do sometime. Don’t worry, school is coming soon, and then I’ll see you again! YAY! :lol: Funny how 1 day to you is a year… FUNNY! I guess that is pretty boring! But keep your hopes up Kath… Keep writing! Miss you Heaps!!! Hello Katherine
Thanks for your comment!
You’re the sweetest thing! Same here.. it is SO hard and boring without you and I sit there, bored to death! Your comment made me smile and laugh. I hope you have something fun and exciting to do sometime. Don’t worry, school is coming soon, and then I’ll see you again! YAY! :lol:
Funny how 1 day to you is a year… FUNNY! I guess that is pretty boring!
But keep your hopes up Kath…
Keep writing!
Miss you Heaps!!!

]]> By: Lilly http://katherine1.edublogs.org/2008/09/17/my-colour-poem/comment-page-1/#comment-52 Lilly Tue, 23 Sep 2008 11:47:22 +0000 http://katherine1.edublogs.org/?p=29#comment-52 Hey Kathy, WOW :!: My favourite part was "My colour is the same colour as an opening of a cave and is the same as a thunder cloud." I agree with Nadine you could smell and taste everything and even reach out to them.. That was an amazing poem on colours you did. :lol: How did you think of those BRILLIANT sentences :?: They really gave me a fright and it froze my computer of frightness :!: Shadow is very scary and I think that black is the colour is just right for him because of his evilness. :mrgreen: :D ;) :) Tooooooooooooooodles ! Keep in touch! Lilly Hey Kathy,

WOW :!:
My favourite part was
“My colour is the same colour as an opening of a cave and is the same as a thunder cloud.”

I agree with Nadine you could
smell and taste everything and even reach out to them..
That was an amazing poem on colours you did. :lol:

How did you think of those BRILLIANT sentences :?:

They really gave me a fright and it froze my computer of frightness :!:

Shadow is very scary and I think that black is the colour is just right for him because of his evilness.
:mrgreen: :D ;) :)
Tooooooooooooooodles !
Keep in touch!
Lilly

]]> By: Nadine http://katherine1.edublogs.org/2008/09/17/my-colour-poem/comment-page-1/#comment-50 Nadine Mon, 22 Sep 2008 04:52:55 +0000 http://katherine1.edublogs.org/?p=29#comment-50 Hello Katherine I loved the poem,and could smell and taste everything and even reach out to them.. Well done, you did the whole poem perfectly well! I like your poem once again, you might want to check mine as well though.. I couldn't take my eyes off the page, your words froze me in my tracks!! Nadine Hello Katherine
I loved the poem,and could smell and taste everything and even reach out to them..
Well done, you did the whole poem perfectly well!
I like your poem once again, you might want to check mine as well though..
I couldn’t take my eyes off the page, your words froze me in my tracks!!

Nadine

]]> By: sarah http://katherine1.edublogs.org/2008/09/17/my-colour-poem/comment-page-1/#comment-49 sarah Mon, 22 Sep 2008 04:52:06 +0000 http://katherine1.edublogs.org/?p=29#comment-49 Hello Katherine!!!! Nice and fantastic blog well done keep up the good work!! If I had the colour black i would describe it just like you did because you described everything about the colour black. Katherine..... i can smell the dark mist of the colour black ;) . Yes i can now feel the darkness rising! Keep up the good work!!! (keep in touch) :) sarah Hello Katherine!!!!
Nice and fantastic blog well done keep up the good work!!
If I had the colour black i would describe it just like you did because you described everything about the colour black. Katherine….. i can smell the dark mist of the colour black ;) . Yes i can now feel the darkness rising!
Keep up the good work!!!
(keep in touch) :)

sarah

]]> By: Zoe http://katherine1.edublogs.org/2008/09/17/my-colour-poem/comment-page-1/#comment-48 Zoe Fri, 19 Sep 2008 05:51:04 +0000 http://katherine1.edublogs.org/?p=29#comment-48 Hi Katherine What a great poem it is really good. The Allstars blog looks fantastic and you have a lot of people coming to visit your blog. My class has started up a wiki if you want to visit it, it is http://56c2008.pbwiki.com Familys blog http://zoesfamily.edublogs.org My blog http://zoe56c08.learnerblogs.org Bye xoxox :) :) Hi Katherine
What a great poem it is really good.
The Allstars blog looks fantastic and you have a lot of people coming to visit your blog. My class has started up a wiki if you want to visit it, it is http://56c2008.pbwiki.com
Familys blog http://zoesfamily.edublogs.org
My blog http://zoe56c08.learnerblogs.org
Bye xoxox :) :)

]]> By: Katherine http://katherine1.edublogs.org/2008/09/17/my-colour-poem/comment-page-1/#comment-47 Katherine Fri, 19 Sep 2008 02:44:50 +0000 http://katherine1.edublogs.org/?p=29#comment-47 Thats good to hear Lati, i think i like that bit too!! :P I read yours on your blog and my favourite part was " My colour feels like a touch of death." That sentence really touched my soul, deeply inside!! Bye Latika :lol: Katherine :mmrgreen: :) ;) :P Thats good to hear Lati,
i think i like that bit too!! :P
I read yours on your blog and my favourite part was ” My colour feels like a touch of death.”
That sentence really touched my soul, deeply inside!!

Bye Latika :lol:

Katherine :mmrgreen: :) ;) :P

]]> By: Latika http://katherine1.edublogs.org/2008/09/17/my-colour-poem/comment-page-1/#comment-46 Latika Thu, 18 Sep 2008 05:43:04 +0000 http://katherine1.edublogs.org/?p=29#comment-46 Hi Kathy That was a very dark colour poem. I loved it. My favourite part was when you said "My colour feels like darkness rising" that was really good. I've done the character Shadow too i'm going to put it up next week maybe. Bye Lati :lol :P :) :D :mrgreen: Hi Kathy
That was a very dark colour poem. I loved it. My favourite part was when you said “My colour feels like darkness rising” that was really good. I’ve done the character Shadow too i’m going to put it up next week maybe.
Bye Lati :lol :P :) :D :mrgreen:

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