Finally, to the end!
Well, i guess you have all been commenting my Stranger post and thoughtfully Nadine was the closest! And for everybody who had commented is suppose to get…… a round of applause for trying!
Also, i hoped you enjoyed my story so far because this is the last chapter!
I pretty much enjoyed it as well! So here goes the next chapter:
I decided to to stop this madness and make sure our school is a safe place and a happy place to stay in! I was going to the girls toilet to see what is causing all of this diasters. No body is going to get hurt or killed. Making a difference was hard, no body cared even though i was trying to save the school neither did they encourage me, i guess i have to do everything on my own than.
As i walked bravely down to the girls toilets, i heard whispering noises. The noises came form inside the girls toilets and i wanted to see what it was. When i was about to seet my foot on the tiled ground i froze . I stood there like ice, i could feel my blood suddenly turning cold as well. It was like being trapped in ice!! So i decided not to freeze and do nothing, i kept going no matter what! I took a few steps further into the girls toilet and waited for something to happen. While i waited i heared strange voices coming from the walls!
I took a few steps deeper into the girls toilet and found a sprite, the sprite was a s white as paper. I was shocked at the begining and was a little bit claim at the second time. I started to speak. ” Hello, who are you?” No body answered. After a minute slience the sprite finally spoke. “ Hello.” ” I’m a sprite.” “yes i can see that.” i said mumbling.
“Why are you killing almost everybody?” i asked. ” Because the parent of these childern locked me in hear for 2 weeks and i starved to death! ” The sprite yelled. ” Did my parents do anything wrong? ” ” No, they didn’t, they tried to help me but they couldn’t open it because they didn’t have the key! ” she said sadly. ” I never got to see the sun again.
” What if i take you with me and you can travel on the school grounds and look at te sun when ever you want?” I offered. ” Yes! That would be great!” she said with excitment! So i took her outside and she got to see the sun again, she also promised never to kill or hurt anybody!
And that is the end! If you like this story please comment back, saying how many parts you liked and how many you didn’t like!
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That’s a really neat story. Are you plannig on writing others. If you are please tell me because I would like to read them. Thanks
Posted November 6, 2008, 10:44 ammegana09.edublogs.org
Megan
Kathy,
But your blog is always splendid in my words.
I definitely loved the whole story. I was surprised to see such a tiny little thing, creature in other words, kill all those kids which are much bigger than it.
But after you explained the shocking reasons, I sighed and thought to myself it was only killing because it couldn’t see the sun! How terrible…
AMAZING. The twists were fabulous, the tale was tremendous and the whole idea and ending was superb!! Well done. I am really glad that naughty sprite won’t kill anyone anymore…
P.S Thanks for your comment Kath, sorry I didn’t choose you! But I couldn’t because the challenge instructions said that I should only write about 3 blogs that I haven’t commented on or visited, but I already have commented on your blog… so it was a shame I have to say! Sorry.
Nadine
Posted November 9, 2008, 8:09 pmstubc08
Hey Katherine,
Posted November 10, 2008, 3:13 amThanks for commenting on my blog. I love Christmas. My favorite part is that all my family comes over and we share the gifts and have fun playing with them or using them together. I am definitely happy about Christmas, it’s one of my favorite times of year. I don’t know where you live but where I live, there’s always snow and it’s a great time. We decorate our Christmas tree with my family.
Keep in touch.
Megan=)